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Fawl Naxin



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PostSubject: -Inactive- Fawl Naxin   Thu May 31, 2012 7:15 am

Name (RP):

Fawl Naxin

Gender (RL)

Male

Age (RL)

16

Age (RP):

16

Gender (RP):

Male

Race (RP):

Chistori

Planet of Origin (RP):

Cato Nemodia

Bio (RP):

Fawl Naxin was born on Cato Nemodia in 318 ABY. He grew up in a hostile environment; his clan was constantly at war with the native Nemodians over land ownership. In 331 ABY, this conflict reached a new high. And an end.

One day, the Nemodians came close to reaching the Chistori village. Fawl's mother left to help his father drive the Nemodians from the village, but they failed. Not long after, the attackers were storming the village and killing the remaining Chistori.

In the heat of the raid, a lean, older Nemodian male had broken into Fawl's house. The man searched every corner while creeping around the house. This whole time, Fawl and his younger sister M'thur were hiding under a bed, waiting for the Nemodian to leave.

Suddenly, M'thur unconsciously moved her arm. That was enough to draw the attention of the invading Nemodian over to the bed. Fawl's eyes followed the man's feet as he lurked closer to the bed. When the Nemodian eventually reached under the bed, he happened to grab M'thur.

Fawl's hand quickly shot out to grab her, but instead he was able to grab the Nemodians arm. From there, he was able to slam him into the ground, rendering him unconscious. The two then escaped through a window. Lucky for them, their house was on the outskirts of the village, and they were able to sneak away.

The two traveled for a few days until they began to live in secrecy near a small Nemodian town. Fawl would make frequent trips to the town in disguise to steal food for his sister and he. One night, while Fawl was sneaking his hand to grab a piece of fruit, the shopkeeper snatched his arm. The Nemodian shopkeeper gave him a hardened look, and he could see the desperation in the young boy's eyes. After checking if anyone was around, the Nemodian offered to let he and M'thur stay with him.

Fawl weaved a close friendship with the Nemodian, and he came to learn that his name was Lornos. Luckily for Fawl, Lornos happened to be very interested in the Force. In fact Lornos had a whole library filled with information about the Force, Jedi, Sith... the whole works. For the few years that Fawl stayed with Lornos, he spent much of his time in this library, studying the history of the galaxy and its inhabitants.

Out of curiosity, Lornos decided to test the boy's midi-cholorian count. With an amount that could have easily made him a Jedi, Lornos was astonished by his discovery. "You've got a gift", Lornos would always tell him, "You need to go speak with the Jedi."

Through trial and error, Lornos was eventually able to convince Fawl that going to the Jedi Academy on Yavin 4 was the best place for him. So, the next time a Jedi transport ship came along, Fawl climbed aboard. And his parting gift: Lornos' word that M'thur would be kept safe.


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PostSubject: Re: -Inactive- Fawl Naxin   Thu May 31, 2012 5:46 pm

I like the story, however there is one problem.
Even if someone is force sensitive, he or she cant use it without the proper training.
So if you want to fix that i would appreciate that alot.

We like to keep everything in our RP's realistic so i hope you understand.

Everything else looks fine same as the story, just edit it and it will be just fine.

Goodluck during your hopeful period and hope to see you soon!

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PostSubject: Re: -Inactive- Fawl Naxin   Thu May 31, 2012 7:48 pm

I've changed it up a bit, notably the second half.
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PostSubject: Re: -Inactive- Fawl Naxin   Thu May 31, 2012 8:38 pm

Welcome to the Galactic Federation.
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PostSubject: Re: -Inactive- Fawl Naxin   Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:30 am

I like it! Especially cause you had the curiosity to ask about the Librarian corps Very Happy which I lead, So thumbs up for you XD

Goodluck in your time as a hopeful, do not FAIL ME! Twisted Evil
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PostSubject: Re: -Inactive- Fawl Naxin   Sat Jun 02, 2012 5:57 am

Thanks so much! Kordan sent me my skin, and I've put it in my folder. I'm currently attempting to use it, but it's not showing up when I go to make my character. Hopefully I'll figure it out soon.
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PostSubject: Re: -Inactive- Fawl Naxin   Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:07 am

Fawl Naxin wrote:
Thanks so much! Kordan sent me my skin, and I've put it in my folder. I'm currently attempting to use it, but it's not showing up when I go to make my character. Hopefully I'll figure it out soon.

I don't mind attempting to assist you with whatever issues you may have. If you would like to add me on skype or over xfire I'll try to help troubleshoot your problem

Xfire: aaron491
skype: john.ghorishkov
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PostSubject: Re: -Inactive- Fawl Naxin   Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:52 pm

Your skin codes are

/model Falwn
/model Falwn/Lin
/model Falwn/Battle

Write those in the CMD. If you want to quickly change to them, write in the CMD:

/bind 0 model Falwn

The "0" is actually whatever key you want to bind the model to.
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