-Accepted- Nalani Tal'Kina

Name (RP): Nalani Tal'Kina
Gender(RL) Male
AGE(RL) 23
Age (RP): 16
Gender(RP): Female
Race (RP):Twi'lek
Planet of Origin (RP): Ryloth
Bio (RP):She was born on the Ryloth planet. For her the father was a tradesman which unfortunately got into the swing of serious debts. There was already no possibility of the repayment, mercenaries wiped his family out and kidnapped the short girl and did with slave. She worked on Tatooine as the dancer and the prostitute. Years passed and hopeless life Nalani didn't assume on colours. At some point strange woman fell into the hiding place of thugs, older from Nalani, however similar. In anger she wiped everyone out, using the force and the lightsaber. She took care Nalani, telling her entire stories about oneself. Her name was Vexiss, her older sister which was able to use the forcepower. Knowing that such talent has Nalani, led her to the temple, where was supposed to undergo the training in order to get to know recesses of the force

P.S Im sorry for my english..Im not good at it.

From what I've read , it looks good Nalani .
Welcome to the Galactic Federation's Templar Jedi Order , and I hope you will end your Training well here
and maybe stay with us .
Good Luck in your Hopeful Period , I assume you will do it far .

thank you I assure that will be fun

Don't worry about your level of the english language, your doing fine.

Anyway, everything looks good so welcome and good luck in the future!